So I heard back from the publisher after resubmitting my edited work and it’s still not good enough.
I still have a lot of passive voice, and I haven’t built my new world properly, and my descriptions in the beginning – while good – are a bit confusing?
I’m not sure what else I can change. I guess I need professional help to get it right.
Maybe for now I should put it aside and focus on my studies and try again in a couple years?